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1º try [link]
2º try [link]

And now heres the 3º :D

Edit:The details you see in this pic will not be apllied in every page of my manga XD. That would be a pain ahah. This kind of style will only be used in the make of big panels, so there's no need to say you prefer de 2nd try. The style will be what you see here but with less details. :)

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:iconw-junkie:
Nice, I can see your style has really developed since the first one. Can't wait to see the manga!:D

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ウエアハウス ジャンキ
:iconriz0345:
I dnt like this style its a lil bitt too realistic... 2 degree was the best to me das just my opinion... This still is super awesome like always tho lol

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ChEcK oUt Mi MaNgA "SALSA," rediculous name, good manga----->[link]
:iconexoah:
Its good, but I believe you put too much detail into the corner of the mouths and the side of the nose so that it sort of edges more towards a western comic than a manga. But if that was what your going for, then you shouldnt have it any other way.

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"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser."

Tejina! Peep it!
:iconthe-third-eskimo:
Ur line deatil reminds me of the manga Vagabond. I really love ur style!
:iconbrokenalchemy:
The Fumiko in this one creeps the fuck out of me. Van and the lazy guy both look ace, though.

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I put the sexy in dyslexia
:iconblack-sandwich:
EXCELLENT. Man, you've improved.
:iconharlequin87:
das 3 tentativas, gosto mais da 2ª para manga.mas segue o teu estilo, este tb esta mt fixe^^

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"Save a horse, ride a King..."
:iconrdfng:
I really like seeing how people have progressed over the years and you definately have. Great job with the semi-realism, but I prefer the 2º over any other. 1º is great for like shonen manga and silly things and I think 2º would be great for like seinen fields. 3º is great, don't get me wrong, and it would do well with seinen areas. Keep doing your best!

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:iconkonghoham:
I prefer 2º over the others...You're doing a great job in semi-realism here, but I don't think it is fitting to the type of plot that you are trying to do. It looks a lot more like a western comic style than one for a manga. It looks great, but 2º is my preference. Keep up the good work!
:iconjuscallmetd:
nice ... the 2nd degree looks alot neater bt this style is good... bt i dnt like the fumiko in this 1 .. the 2nd degree version of her is wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better

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