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Takoru: CWTB wip by TAKORUone Takoru: CWTB wip by TAKORUone
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lol, i'm almost done
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M-D-Remadee Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
I liked this colour scheme better than the finished one.
When do you plan on making this manga/comic?
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UchihaMadara07 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
wow awesome
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rodone Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Student General Artist
yeahr coloured it´s definitive better*g
great work done here
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TAKORUone Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Thank u :D
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rodone Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009  Student General Artist
=) i sit at the colouring a long time..xD
sometimes i think i´m too slow.
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Andrea-Lionheart Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
wow it,s great
te esta quedando muy bien =)
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yummorra Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Student General Artist
this is turning out great. you are good with coloring.
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TAKORUone Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Thanks:)
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yummorra Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Student General Artist
no problem :peace:
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Kaneshe Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Amazing ^^
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IHMPCYPAWB Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
You've misplaced the man in the background's bicep. With his arm turned like that, the bicep would be facing outwards, you'd see the triceps closer to his body,and you'd see the Coracobrachialis attaching the arm bone to, well, roughly the collar bone.

Same thing goes with the other arm. The bicep would be facing forward and outward slightly. Not inward. As mentioned above, the wristband he's wearing also needs to have both of it's lines on a downward curve, because his forearm would be coming towards us slightly.
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TAKORUone Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Well He's right.ahhah I do know a lot about anatomy, but sometimes i make mistakes,even knowing. When the drawing is filled with ink i cant go back.lool

So yeah,the biceps are misplaced. Anyway,like AnimeArtistBOOyah said ,this guy is more a beast than a human ahahah , so its cool.:)
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AnimeArtistBooyah Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
he's a beast so who really cares. to the noobie artists the mistake is barely even noticable.
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IHMPCYPAWB Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Just because you're good doesn't mean you shouldn't improve. Besides, I could have also critiqued his monotone shading. What he should really do is make shadows move to cools and highlights to a yellow or some other actual light source. He's not that great. Good for 17, yes, and respectable within his knowledge, but if he doesn't progress at all he's just a poser.
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AnimeArtistBooyah Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
How the hell is he a poser? but still its a critique and all and i really agree with with you and all,but he could easiley beat most of the older artists on deviantart. But its useless to critique on someone who is popular because you have a low chance of getting your critique to them.
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S0Hei Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Well monotone shading is pretty usual on anime\manga style, not everyone likes to shade using alot of colours, some people like it simple just to define forms, sometimes its cool to move away from realism, anyways critique is always good if you want to improve, your 17 and your in the right track just keep drawing everyday.
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alexandresama Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Student Digital Artist
:O i got a feeling that this comment is going to be completely ignored xD
thanks for the med/anatomy lesson tough ^^
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IHMPCYPAWB Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
You're probably right. Or I'll get flamed. You're welcome, though, heh.
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UchihaMadara07 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
idk why but I always pictured Takoru with red hair xD and I pictured the muscle man with black instead of purple but stiill good job =D
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HardToFindAName Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Looking good :] The bracer is a bit weird imo :o It doesn't quite turn around the wrist :s
Great job on anatomy exaggeration :lol:
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Archon706 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
awsome cant wait to see the finished version XD
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