Takoru:Page 3 test

You really did good job with the toning and the shading which gave the right feeling of a manga page, but i don't think you gave it all that you got with the drawing it self though be cause i know you draw much more better than this.The frames are in a good logical order to be followed by the readers and i hope it stays that way in the rest of the pages.We don't know anything about the story yet so i can't tell if it is good or not. From the look of this page it doesn't look like a new kind of a story ,other than we had seen before.